Various, from Intrigue

Per reader Geoff Schaeffer, from Spell of Intrigue:

page 2 - 0 preeminent one (the first O looks like a 0)

page 10 - I didn't wasn't ready for children

page 23 - extra period a few spaces after "wormball out straight into my face."

page 26 - If I 'm being sloppy (extra space in the middle of "I'm")

page 26 - "picked up the pack I 'd leaned" (same space thing)

page 28 - "better of it we gave up tehcnology" (should "it" be "if"?)

pg 40 - I 'd made the resolution

pg 41 - I 'd scored a point

page 120 - another I 'm

page 132 - "0 great detective" (O looks like 0)

Page 180 - "Dooglas, Councillor Douglas"

page 243 - "floating: sphere creature" (unneeded colon?)

page 249 - "my power, 1, Jardin,... (I looks like a 1)

page 258 - "inexorably dulling of his palate" (inexorably - should it be inexorable?)


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